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| + | I was just wondering about clarity of this artical it seams like there are some realy long sentences and is skips over some big points.[[User:Bookskiing|Bookskiing]] ([[User talk:Bookskiing|talk]]) 13:37, May 14, 2016 (UTC)SLK |
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Revision as of 13:37, 14 May 2016
Pounce
I'm not quite sure if the passage about Pounce really fits in Beka's article. Wouldn't it be better to have one article about Pounce/Faithful/The Cat with detailed information about him and just a mention of Pounce in Beka's history and/or the introductory paragraph? --Purzel 18:11, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
I think you're right, it's weird that Pounce doesn't have his own article (it just redirects to Faithful!). The info doesn't belong on Beka's page. How about one article called "The Cat", with sections on Faithful and Pounce? I'm going to set that up ... Cabbers 23:05, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
That's much better. Thanks for setting it up. --Purzel 04:57, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
No prob. I like the work you're doing on Beka's page! Cabbers 20:36, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
Relationships
I was just wondering if we really need the list of her relatives and descentants under "Relationships", when they are also listet in the infobox ... Purzel 09:15, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
Equipment
I'll add a heading for it in the article, once I remember all of the things Beka has that help her in her work. I've just come across her arm guards in Bloodhound, which are reinforced on the outside with thin strips of metal. The metal strips actually are knives, which are particularly valuable to Beka because they aren't easily spottet but easily reached by Beka.[1]
I also recall something about a spelt mirror that allowed Beka to see people disguised/invisible through magic earlier in that book and there also was something about a bruise balm her mother had once made for her in Terrier.
Then there's the usual Dog gear, like baton, uniform, a sap, gorget and light armor for the Cesspool. I also remember some gloves which enable her not to leave any traces, but I think that comes later in Bloodhound, so I'll probably find the reference soon enough.
Notes and references
- ↑ Bloodhound, September 15, 247 (p. 223)
Clarty
I was just wondering about clarity of this artical it seams like there are some realy long sentences and is skips over some big points.Bookskiing (talk) 13:37, May 14, 2016 (UTC)SLK